Traditional pickup lines, I abandoned
On a day, I had my head out
While for traditional hookup lines, I modified,
Developing a creative state of mind
Protected in a head, that which appeared first,
Before I arrived here
Resulting modified hookup lines, led I here
But on a day before last, they earned yours truly
An amazing and undesirable rough encounter,
Which could only be demonstrated
Neither narrated, nor described by fancy voices
The ones you heard every time you thought twice
You trusted them before, they led you into failure
It never stopped you from listening to them again
Hoping that another time, it would be a lot different
The same voices, led I here
Anticipating a good encounter
Wearing an outfit,
I snatched from a housemateβs closet
I should have called her my roommate
Not because; we spent most nights in my room
But mainly because, she transferred all her shit,
Into my room
An organized room, I used to maintain
Everything changed, since her and I,
Had our first encounter
Tingled from HeteroSexual Chaos, available at your favorite store in electronic and audio formats.
I just adore you Joseph. So creative. The video is crucial. I love this performance. And the music, and the rooster… just wonderful. But what happened??? (the random reader inquires while reading) Will there be a further instalment to this tale? By the way I love the music, the background sounds and scenes, and your delivery, because it brings lightness to a topic that while read in black and white (and blue links!) text only, felt dark and forboding… beautiful contrasts. Hugs and love my friend, another Josephian masterpiece xoxoxo πππ€
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Am not sure if you are a fun of the cartoon Family Guy, but I am right now doing Stewie’s celebratory dance ππππ I love the analysis and useful information feedback. I truly appreciate it Nadine.. Hang in there Nadine, this poetic short story is broken down into nine long verses. Although the start sounds dark, it gets humorous mid way and the ending is spectacular ππππ
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Awsome, looking very very much forward to it Joseph ππππ
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Oh, “Josephian Masterpiece”, I love it and definitely going to steal and start using it in my works π ππ€π€
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Yippee! I love that you love it, use it with glee πππ·π
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I just saw this on Twitter: love your delivery (and the rooster joining in) π
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πππππ thanks Chris for appreciating, we need to involve voices of other creatures gifted by mother nature π€π
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Most definitely!
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