Stubbornness and desires of experimenting
Craved deeply in selfish hearts
A doomed possibility,
Was on a rising horizon
Colored purple and yellow, a rare mix
Unknown in a natural occurrence
Less care, spirit controllers offered.
A last breath of theirs, initiated trouble on
The land left behind with hidden truths
Abandoned with words
Of fallen spirit controllers
Losing track of freed spirits
Backstabbing a shady loophole of how?
Freed spirits were trapped in a first place?
Or perhaps why?
Freed spirits, were never allowed to roam
The land, or its belongings?
Snatched from Orgasmic Sinister. Available in Electronic and Audio formats. All Rights Reserved
Well, video was very unexpected, but i enjoyed it, you always had full pockets of wordsโค๏ธ
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Awwh Ilona, I am glad you picked up an unexpected vibe ๐ ๐ the piece is trailing towards it’s intentions… Why and/or how a Healer turns out to be Bewitched ๐๐๐๐
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When you said โsnatched fromโ in one of your earlier pieces I thought that meant โtaken fromโ or โstolen fromโ (though still giving credit) fromโ another authorโs blog or placeโฆ having clicked the link this time I realize it is your own poetryโฆ it is amazing and beautiful. Is it you in the youtube videos reading your own poetry as well?
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Yes Nadine, it is my own poetry and creations. I use snatched to be dramatic, applying a twisted poetic rhyme to the ending. And yes again, I enjoy reciting my works adding a little character to it in the videos. What do you think of the videos? Thank you very much for appreciating and the editorial insight. ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐๐
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Honestly I’m blown away and I think you are amazing Joseph. Really and truly amazing ๐๐๐๐๐ Super happy your book was on French Amazon, I have bought it ๐I have a backlog of books to read but I am happy to have this one on it, it looks fantastic ๐ Sincere kudos and congratulations. ๐โ๏ธ๐๐
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I am truly honored and hope you enjoy it. It’s good to have a backlog, you never run out of what to read ๐๐ Keep being cool and amazing Nadine ๐ค๐๐
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So true. I love a snippet here and there…I guess Iโm a 10-book at a time type gal and just have to accept that and embrace it rather than get all uptight about just reading one st a time ๐๐๐ค๐ค๐
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Yeah, me too ๐ Now I feel less guilty. I have a collection of unfinished to read books. Not due to loss of interest, but excitement to encounter a new storyline or theme. However, before a month ends, I ensure to at least finish one ๐๐๐
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That’s a great goal. I’m gonna try that too. ๐บ1๏ธโฃโ๏ธ๐
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๐ ๐ waiting to hear how that goes ๐๐ last Tuesday the struggle was real for I ๐โบ๐ง
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๐Hmm, yes well good thing you mentionned that, I’m 60% through one of them, guess I’ll focus on that one and make sure I’ve got at least one done for May ๐๐๐
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Sounds like a good plan ๐ ๐ what’s the title?
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“This Naked Mind” by Annie Grace. A reader emailed me suggesting it to me. I’m kind of tired of self-help but I bought it so now I’m reading it. For its genre it’s really good, though I felt I had already tackled these ideas in my mind. Still, it’s excellent reinforcement and I make myself read 10 pages per day. I set a reminder on my phone and it buzzes angrily at me till I do it. :))
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And thank you! ๐๐
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You are welcome Nadine, but please, allow I to keep the pleasure ๐ง๐
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Please do. ๐Thanks again. ๐ฃ๐
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That was heavy to read. No, I don’t mean it’s bad. It’s written nicely. Just a bit heavy for me and takes a little time to digest.
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Awwwh, sowi Jessica ๐ฎ Thank you very much for letting I know. Am going to tone it down a bit in the next verse. Did it make any sense? ๐ค
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I don’t think you have to tone it down. I’m simply used to reading not so heavy stuff, but I understood it. I’m sure there are readers who loved it as it is.
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Um, time to get it darker ๐๐๐ but the next poetic short story will be a light one, just for you Jessica. Please check out Ploughed River City for now, you may like it: https://bocc.live/2018/06/06/ploughed-river-city-1-of-8/
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Ok. Thanks Joseph ๐
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You are welcome Jessica, and the pleasure is mine ๐
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