Dark Poetry

Bewitched Healer 3 of 8

Stubbornness and desires of experimenting
Craved deeply in selfish hearts
A doomed possibility,
Was on a rising horizon
Colored purple and yellow, a rare mix
Unknown in a natural occurrence
Less care, spirit controllers offered.
A last breath of theirs, initiated trouble on
The land left behind with hidden truths
Abandoned with words
Of fallen spirit controllers
Losing track of freed spirits
Backstabbing a shady loophole of how?
Freed spirits were trapped in a first place?
Or perhaps why?
Freed spirits, were never allowed to roam
The land, or its belongings?

Snatched from Orgasmic Sinister. Available in Electronic and Audio formats. All Rights Reserved

23 thoughts on “Bewitched Healer 3 of 8”

    1. Awwh Ilona, I am glad you picked up an unexpected vibe 👏 👏 the piece is trailing towards it’s intentions… Why and/or how a Healer turns out to be Bewitched 😋😊😆🙏

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  2. When you said “snatched from” in one of your earlier pieces I thought that meant “taken from” or “stolen from” (though still giving credit) from” another author’s blog or place… having clicked the link this time I realize it is your own poetry… it is amazing and beautiful. Is it you in the youtube videos reading your own poetry as well?

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    1. Yes Nadine, it is my own poetry and creations. I use snatched to be dramatic, applying a twisted poetic rhyme to the ending. And yes again, I enjoy reciting my works adding a little character to it in the videos. What do you think of the videos? Thank you very much for appreciating and the editorial insight. 👏 👏 👏 😊😃

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      1. Honestly I’m blown away and I think you are amazing Joseph. Really and truly amazing 👏👏👏👏👏 Super happy your book was on French Amazon, I have bought it 👍I have a backlog of books to read but I am happy to have this one on it, it looks fantastic 👌 Sincere kudos and congratulations. 👊✌️🏆🎉

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      2. I am truly honored and hope you enjoy it. It’s good to have a backlog, you never run out of what to read 😊😉 Keep being cool and amazing Nadine 🤗🙌👊

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      3. So true. I love a snippet here and there…I guess I’m a 10-book at a time type gal and just have to accept that and embrace it rather than get all uptight about just reading one st a time 😆👌🤓🤗👍

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      4. Yeah, me too 😅 Now I feel less guilty. I have a collection of unfinished to read books. Not due to loss of interest, but excitement to encounter a new storyline or theme. However, before a month ends, I ensure to at least finish one 💃😄😃

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      7. 😆Hmm, yes well good thing you mentionned that, I’m 60% through one of them, guess I’ll focus on that one and make sure I’ve got at least one done for May 👍🙏😇

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      9. “This Naked Mind” by Annie Grace. A reader emailed me suggesting it to me. I’m kind of tired of self-help but I bought it so now I’m reading it. For its genre it’s really good, though I felt I had already tackled these ideas in my mind. Still, it’s excellent reinforcement and I make myself read 10 pages per day. I set a reminder on my phone and it buzzes angrily at me till I do it. :))

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    1. Awwwh, sowi Jessica 😮 Thank you very much for letting I know. Am going to tone it down a bit in the next verse. Did it make any sense? 🤔

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      1. I don’t think you have to tone it down. I’m simply used to reading not so heavy stuff, but I understood it. I’m sure there are readers who loved it as it is.

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